Reviews: Public Comments Page Six

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My fiction is publicly available on web sites that allow readers to post public comments about what they have read. These comments are an indication of the views of ordinary readers. In the interests of shameless and blatant self-promotion, I reproduce here those comments that have been complimentary. These comments are already publicly available.

The Cream of Sheba


Ton8ty (Literotica)	Wonderful! I loved it. However, I think that this tale properly belongs in the “How To” category. If more writers paid better attention to their audience, the quality of their work might improve significantly.
Boyd (Literotica)	Great Hilarious!


The House to Themselves


noone269 (Literotica)	Another great story You have done it again, keep up the great work!!

TheCaptain (Literotica)	Damn fine work! I thought your story was great! Much better than most, and definitely worth the read. Thanks for writing!

Anonymous (Literotica)	MTV Just a comment on the person who objected to the MTV: The breaks in between all of the action were intentional. It's a style of writing. It's metaphoric. Not all erotica has to be SEXSEXSEXEND. Now, a comment on the submission, if you will: This was a great piece of writing; matured writing with naive characters. The child at the end was perfect. The pace and 60’s-with-technology feel were showing of a true writer. Having read this after suffering three paragraphs of a submission that the author was probably jerking off while writing, I am impressed. I don't view it, in retrospect, as a piece of erotica so much as a piece of true writing. Well done.

The Imposter

littlered1 (Lush Stories)	Very interesting and even satirically humorous. I liked this very much. The sex was good but in reality had little to do with the real story. Classic erotic tale.

The Philosopher’s Tool

TuDestino (Sticky Pen)	Awesome Wow that was like nothing I’ve ever read before. I really enjoyed it. I hope you’ll write more.

The Price of Prejudice
Anonymous (Literotica)	Amazing story. I really felt the emotions of the two girls and the mentality of the prejudice was well done as well.

The Pursuit of Manliness

Anonymous (Literotica)	Cute and hot A fun, silly romp. Nice writing!

The Silent Tutsi

tak0chan (Lush Stories)	Congratulations on a hauntingly beautiful and poignantly moving story that I know I will come back to and re-read again and again.

bluewolf12 (Lush Stories)	Such an amazing read. Really got involved with the characters.

Thoroughly Modern Emancipation

Anonymous (Literotica)	Ethics and attitudes toward slavery A pleasure to read! Plays with some of the subtler aspects of slavery and attitudes toward slavery in a fictional future United States. Deals with the hypocrisy of those who flatter themselves on having an ethic of reform while actually maintaining, and taking full advantage of, a brutal institution.
Vagina Dialogue

Poison Ivan (Ruthie’s Club)	I doubt anyone who reads this newsletter knows this, but I have what I believe to be the largest collection of synonyms of the female genitalia ever collected. The list is getting close to 2000 words now. Some are funny, some are baffling, some are vulgar, and some are quite nice. We have the “Cunt Equals” box on the Club Cocktails page because I have a special fondness for the various euphemisms we use for that special part of the woman’s anatomy. There are synonyms, and then there is Bradley Stoke’s new story, “Vagina Dialogues.” As the owner of the Not-So-Famous Pussy List, all I can say is, “Wow, you must read this story.” I thought it was funny and instructive. I think you’ll find it funny, at least.

Waiting for the Longships

danceswithsunlight (Lush Stories)	Very horny story; Viking women must have been very strong;mentally emotionally, and psychically to survive the winters; a psychological and detailed description of life in Norse times!