Reviews: Public Comments Page Five

Page Five

My fiction is publicly available on web sites that allow readers to post public comments about what they have read. These comments are an indication of the views of ordinary readers. In the interests of shameless and blatant self-promotion, I reproduce here those comments that have been complimentary. These comments are already publicly available.

Party Slave


Steve150177 (Literotica)		Not a jill/jack off story, but ... This story clearly illustrates the 2nd reason that real (as opposed to consensual) slavery is always evil. The 1st reason is because of what it does to the slaves. The 2nd reason is because of what it does to the slave owners. and The 3rd reason is because of how it retards technological progress in society as a whole. . . . . Notice that the Age of Enlightenment began after the Black Death had undermined the basis of the serf system by killing so many of all classes off. As to the owners -- If rich men find it hard to get into heaven (as Jesus said), then how much harder for a man who raped 1 or 2 women every day to get into heaven? I give it 5***** for that.

Peace Returns


Anonymous (Literotica)		I hated it-in a backwards kind of way It took me a few paragraphs (ok, more than I’d like to admit) but this was a very original way to explore a life spiralling out of control. Very consistent and well done

Anonymous in nedewS (Literotica)		!taerG .levels many so on backwards was that, Wow. Gonna check to see if you’ve written anything else now.

Anonymous (Literotica)		Great Writing This is great writing, and one of the most original pieces I've read.

Anonymous (Literotica)		GREAT STORY What a powerful story. Another take on the downward spiral. This should be required reading for everyone who has ever taken that first step.
Reality


JoJo Jinx (X Wives)		I just read a new Bradley Stoke’s story over on ASSM. He calls it Reality but really it is about virtual reality. It has some similarities to MMORPGs and some to Stanislaw Lem’s “The Cyberiad” but as always Stoke imbues it with his own particular flavour. Click on over and give it a read. He’s one of my favourite authors.


Sliding Sideways


Sitting (Lush Stories)		Loved this. I enjoyed Sliding Doors (the movie) but this was just perfect. A great idea and I love how you altered events... or did you?! Excellently written!

Snow White

onyxessence (Literotica)		Nicely written I liked the story; it's definitely one of the best written I've come across on this site. The characters were well written and the story was rich with elements of the unexpected. I particularly liked the realistic descriptions of the dwarves!

Superslut

Bridget69 (Literotica)		Super! I think that even the most ardent bible thumpers have this hidden persona.

hansbwl (Literotica)		Brilliant So refreshing to read an original story. Very good!!!
littlered1 (Lush Stories)		This was a great story. Her alter-ego fighting her all the way. It is good to learn from your more carnal side but it's not what you want to be. Love is better than lust.

Teen Spirit

J.Q. Hack (Literotica)		Great story. I think the tone and mood you set in the story was spot on. Without seemingly too much effort you got what it’s like to be awkward and unpopular. The sex scene showed what a first time would be like -- not the day long marathons seen in many stories. Thankfully you kept the ending realistic and plausible.
tak0chan (Lush Stories)		A beautifully observed story, told with great sensitivity and style!
The Coming of Age

DirtyMindedMom (Lush Stories)		I don't usually read "science fiction," but this wonderful story has opened up the possibilities for me. I love the vision of this story and the freedom to imagine alternate moral realities. Very sexy stuff!