Night Out

Tainted Lime

At the outset of this story, Bunny and her mother are screaming at each other. Bunny’s mother doesn’t care for Bunny’s revealing clothes, but Bunny doesn’t give a fuck what her mother says - she’s going out with her gang.

Bunny’s gang of girls hangs out in the park, sucking cocks for cigarettes and beer. They are a raucous, lewd bunch, and when Steph, one of the proper girls from school, happens by, one of the posse pisses on Steph’s shoes.

Bunny is embarrassed by the pissing incident, though. And the next day, as the rest of the gang skips school to recover from their hangovers, Bunny apologizes to Steph. They even have a decent conversation. Bunny begins to feel a tug of arousal for the good-looking girl from the right side of the tracks.

This is an interesting story. Bunny’s gang is brash, obscene, and shocking. Bunny’s attraction towards Steph is a classic attraction of opposites. How the attraction works itself out is a great idea for a story. 

It’s a good story, and the ending is spectacular.

Rating: 5 - Exceptional