Innocence Lost
Laurel
(Literotica)
I have to tell you all I think it’s brilliant - very witty, great use of language, lots of sarcasm, extremely well done... I’m a big fan of dark comedy, and have enjoyed this series immensely. I try not to praise submissions too often because it’s not really my place (that’s what readers are for!), but I have to say something about this work - at least give the man props for putting together something of this epic size that stays compelling and funny all the way through. Check it out and let me know what y’all think...
Raven
(Literotica)
I really enjoyed the first three of these stories. The concept of a hermaphrodite was really different and interesting, and I liked the names of the characters standing for human characteristics.
Laurel
(Literotica)
If you’re a fan of dry humor (or shemales, or both) and haven’t read “Innocence Lost”, you really oughtta. It’s hip, it’s witty, and it’s irreverent.