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| Anonymous
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Good for you. Good for you. At first I thought you were going to end it with Diana converting to Christianity. Thank goodness you didn’t. It was a hot story and a sad tale. Thank you for presenting the Gods with compassion, especially the fair Aphrodite. |
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Riveting story Very elegant writing! Your characters are fully fleshed-out despite (I think) the difficulty in keeping them from seeming like caricatures, or otherwise 2-D characters. One of the things that makes this story so smooth is that you were very faithful to Diana's POV, and I experienced it all through her. Good job! The mood and atmosphere you created were perfectly matched to the story, and all the erotic parts were very much an organic outgrowth of it, not gratuitously stuck in there. Thank you for submitting this!
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